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I don't know what the hell this Deviantart Rating catagories are meaning and since there's nothing that explains it over there, I'm not going to really bother with it, so whatever you get 5 stars, I don't care about that and you shouldn't either.

I think you should make your pages come through a little larger. This is okay since it's all stacked, but I would hope each page by itself is going to be larger than one piece of this stack.

I think Victor doesn't look sufficiently old enough? I get that he's supposed to be spry still, but I've always thought his lack of wrinkles and just general look of age made him not look like he was actually in his mid-60's. Unless he had some serious botox work done on him, you should toss more detail on him.

All the other characters present look good and the art is fun. That usage of different art on in the picture frames at the bottom seems kind of distracting and I would prefer if you had just done like something originally by yourself there. (And if you DID do it, that hyper detailed and rendered look against your other stuff in the comic looks really weird.)

You've got some perspective issues in the kitchen appliances and the chairs in the dining area. Your gradient use here is looking solid, but your shadows are kind of inconsistent and you should make sure to address them. When the door is opened in the peniultimate panel, you have no shadows underneath May and Sharon or coming from the kitchen or whatever. Make sure to take the time on these things, since both lacking shadows and rough perspectives can add up over time.

I know you're capable of great work and I hope to see more of this soon.
Sweet Itch Avatar
I also got some practice in one burst with Sweet Itch for animation, too!
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Dr. Fabulous Avatar
A little avatar of Dr. Fabulous done up for some animation practice. I've always kind of liked the freedom and looseness granted with squigglevision, it's really nice when you have very little experience! I also didn't do too bad, looks like I'm passable in the digital department??
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Morty 2015 by RoflQu
Morty 2015
Not so myth or legend, but definitely the best sidekick Dr. Fabulous could ever ask for. Ever since his original design sheet in 2007, I've realized that I've been drawing Morty steadily younger and cooler looking, despite the fact he hasn't changed his age.
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Dr. Fabulous 2015 by RoflQu
Dr. Fabulous 2015
The most beautiful man in the world, Dr. Fabulous. The Legend, the wonder, the sex appeal, Dr. Fabulous.
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Hey, so I'm gonna be mostly uploading to tumblr from now on, so if you wanna look at me there or something, ewschneider.tumblr.com
Every once in a while I'll post back here, but mostly I'm gonna use tumblr.

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TheBastart Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the fav! ;)
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Marmottegarou Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for the fav on .: Smurfette :. by Marmottegarou  :ahoy:
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RoflQu Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
Sure thing, you've got a nice style.
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Blumestien Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wait, WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!
You.. You just watch me?? :iconepicstareplz:
(Thanks you Very much! I love you..)
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RoflQu Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
I just watch you. Your art's good! Keep it up!
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Blumestien Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh... I cry, thanks u!
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StarJita Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I really dig the comic style in your art. Looks like it should be in the sunday newspaper or somethin :D
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RoflQu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
Thanks so much!
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FrancyRhamira Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Photographer
Thanks for the fav! :)
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CinnamonAlmonds Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Dis be my other account. Hola compadre for the third time
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